The purpose of all language is to communicate (Essberger 2015). In fact, many writers struggle with effective communication. In academia, writers encounter difficulties with grammar, comma splices, and punctuation. These and other writing errors can be corrected; accordingly, by taking effective measures, practicing regularly, and seeking help. There are few distinctions between written and spoken discourse. According to Khairunnisa Mohammad, “Written discourse is more structurally complex and more elaborate than spoken discourse” (Mohammad 2012). As graduate students, we learn to be critical thinkers, and to be rational in our understanding of a subject matter. Critical thinking helps graduate student gain the necessary tools to engage in reflective and independent thinking (2015). Furthermore, critical thinking offers the ability to engage in self-reflection and examine the importance of ideas.
The article “Helping students meet the challenges of academic writing”, devotes a paragraph to struggling students. “By internalizing and taking up aspects of negative instructor discourses” quotes L.A. Fernsten and M. Reda “some students may come to see themselves as ineffectual writers.” This is particularly true for learners with lower levels of self-esteem, who may easily get discourage by criticism. While this issue concerns scholars of all backgrounds, faculty members should make an effort to recognize those students at higher risk of becoming ineffectual writers.
Mohammad, K. (2012, April 27). Differences between spoken and written discourse. Retrieved October 1, 2015.
Josef Essberger, J. (n.d.). Speaking versus Writing. Retrieved October 2, 2015.
Helping students meet the challenges of academic writing
Linda A. Fernsten , Mary Reda
Vol. 16, Iss. 2, 2011
What is critical thinking? (n.d.). Retrieved October 2, 2015.
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Comments
Good work, David. I enjoyed reading this blog. Mostly, it is very clear and flows well. A couple of problems:
1) Misuse of semicolon creating sentence fragment: "In academia, writers encounter difficulties with grammar, comma splices, and punctuation. These and other writing errors can be corrected; accordingly, by taking effective measures, practicing regularly, and seeking help."
2) No comma in a list of two. Delete second comma. "As graduate students, we learn to be critical thinkers, and to be rational in our understanding of a subject matter."
3) Delete comma between subject and verb - "The article “Helping students meet the challenges of academic writing”, devotes a paragraph"
4) Awkward. Read aloud - restructure to smoothly incorporate the quotation - “By internalizing and taking up aspects of negative instructor discourses” quotes L.A. Fernsten and M. Reda “some students may come to see themselves as ineffectual writers.”
5) Avoid unmodified this. Always say this what for greater clarity and precision - "This is particularly true..."
Otherwise, good. Keep an eye on those type of errors as you proofread your critical review.
Thanks!
Angie