It's been a pleasure working with you, Rachel.  Now that you know your career path, it should be clearer sailing.  I wish you the best of luck in your second career.

LaDawn

Rachel,

To write about something we don't know much about to begin with is always a challenge.  It is usually easier to write about what we know.  I've learned a lot more about many topics reading student essays.  Since this is the last one, congratulations on finishing the course.

LaDawn

Rachel,

I'm glad to hear you liked this assignment.  Given the direction you're headed, it's no wonder you are interested in encouraging people to live a more healthy lifestyle.  In terms of editing, that fresh set of eyes will always find more errors than if you simply check it over after writing.  Keep up the hard work.

LaDawn